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| Open Poetry #40 |
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Closure |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Well, it’s been a long time. It's been about 2 years now since I’ve written any poems. Hopefully, today is a turning point. I’ve missed writing, and ... I’ve missed you guys a LOT.  *** Closure Broken dreams that needed mending, Promises that lost their way, Questions with no answers pending, Silent words that had no say. All are part of life’s delivery, Recollections buried deep, Time to move beyond the memory ... Things to rid, and things to keep. Captured are the moments tender, Long before resentment grew, Times of care and dreams of splendor, Years before they ran askew. Drawn to surface came the anguish, Followed by the bitter truth, Faced head-on and forced to banish, That which carved a stolen youth. Resurrection drawn through feelings, Episodes and wronged events, Analyzed in safe surroundings ... No restraints and no pretence. Lessons learned without derision, Closure formed through past vignettes, Satisfied with truth’s decision ... No remorse ... and no regrets. /Kit McCallum |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
wow... lovely write |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A very beautiful poem with a wonderful message. Good to see you posting again.Thank you,martyjo |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
After posting my poem 'Whispering your name', Latearrivel suggest me to read your poem 'Closure', smile... so I did and I am glad I did! Neeraja |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Prayers DO get answered....mine just did. Thank you  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wow Kitty....this is great.....your talent has been missed.... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That's ma girl, well done! I must say, what a birthday gift for me today too, and I am claiming it!  Closure is a gift you give to yourself but then you knew that right?  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, m'dear Kit-ten, I do believe that your ink is like a fine Bordeaux which gets even better with the passing of time! Perfect in form, rhyme, message and time! You and your poetry have been greatly missed! Giving you a big, warm, welcome-back hug ~ and a pat on the back, Linda |
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The Phat Whale New Member
since 2007-06-09
Posts 9 |
Flows excelently |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit You have not lost your touch. Beautiful write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Thanks so much everyone. It sure felt good to post something yesterday. You guys have me smiling over here. I’ve missed you! MegMeg: Thanks for the kind words Meg! Latearrival: Hi MartyJo … it’s nice to post something again from this end! Neeraja: I’m glad MartyJo let you know … thanks for the lovely comment. Balladeer: That’s a very appropriate comment Michael … I’ll have to send you a note, because whether you know it or not … you were whispering something to me on Friday, lol. I’ll need to send you a note to explain that one! Toerag: And I’ve missed you guys too, Toe … thanks! Mysteria: Yes, it is very good, my friend. Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to youuuuuuu, Happy Birthday dear Sharoooooon, Happy Birthday to youuuuuuuu! ;-) Earth Angel: Thank you so much for that beautiful comment Linda … I really appreciate both the words … and the hug! The Phat Whale: Thank you so much Phat, that’s great to hear. Seymour Tabin: Thank you Sy … and I see you are writing as beautifully as always. Lovely to read you. JamesMichael: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed James .. much appreciated. Best wishes and many thanks to all, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh Happy Day.... You've made mine - that's for sure, dear lady - Thank you...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Satisfied with truth’s decision ... No remorse ... and no regrets. ~*~ You cannot ask for any better than that.  We've missed you! |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a wonderful poem, great flow and rythm. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
BIG smile! Nan: You've made my day too ... missed you VERY much! Karilea: It sure feels good, I have to say. I just can't stop grinning on this end. paullallady: Thank you for the kind words ... very much appreciated! *** Words, words, came again ... Lost my mind, but not my pen; Hope they stay and play awhile, God, it's good to wear this smile! *** Wow, small, but another one, rofl!  Big hugs ladies, /Kit |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
That's just really good. Thanks. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kit...Great write. So glad to read you again...Paul She lives...she lives This I know...this I know For this poem tells me so...for this poem tells me so ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wonderfully expressed, the many facets of reflection, acceptance and closure, like a crystal turning in the light. So good to read you again. ~K |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Hi, It's nice to meet you here on the boards. I so look forward to reading more of your poetry and this one is absolutely a treasure. I'll be looking for your past work as I read through the archives. I am glad you are back. Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Satisfied with truth’s decision" For me, only truth provides an acceptable ending. It is wonderful to read you again, Kit. Thank you kindly for reading my rainbow post. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
What a ‘real’, emotive, powerful and refreshingly wonderful ‘write’! In my ever-most-humble opinion, the following is especially fine: “Broken dreams that needed mending, Promises that lost their way, Questions with no answers pending, Silent words that had no say.” this poem deserves a long-sustained ‘standing ovation’!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Boy, it sure feels good to be here again in this capacity, lol. You guys are wonderful! RogueandPoet: Thank you for the kind words RogueandPoet! Paul Wilson: Hi Paul … wonderful to hear from you again as well! Kahlil: Thanks so much Kahlil … it’s nice to be read again! aziza Hi Alison … it’s nice to meet you as well! There’s lots in the archives, hopefully, there will be more in the current forums before long as well. Midnitesun Hi again Midnitesun … thank you for the both the comment and the wonderful read on your rainbow post. My pleasure! Secondhanddreampoet: What a lovely comment … thank you so much Secondhanddreampoet! You thoughts are very much appreciated! Best wishes and much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Satisfied with truth’s decision ... No remorse ... and no regrets. What a great place to be! *S* And it sure is good to see you back around this place! *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oozing talent as usual Kit. Nice to see you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (angel friendship hugs) Oh Kit, though I've expressed my deep thoughts about your most touching and proverbial poem here, it had just occurred to me I hadn't yet commented to that, so I just wanted to apologize for the delay and again tell you exactly how much we value your most empathetic, compassionate and gentle poetic presence here, as all the time I've been here I've been blessed by your friendship and have grown and matured so much from the kind words of you and others, and that ultimately that's one of the greatest beauties of poetry; through each other's hearts and minds we find solace and wisdom through each other's words, and that in itself provides closure in stages for all of us I think! (hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, and I know with all my heart, despite the adversity you've endured as of late, you are destined to indeed shine brighter than ever, as your heart has the strength, love and courage to do so, yay, thank you for sharing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kit, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
not just good poetry but rich wisdom...your a writer Kit...u have the gift...let it keep flowing out of you its healthy and we get to enjoy the art Mark |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Kit my friend, great to see you writing again, I very much enjoyed your work and see that you have not lost your gift, thank you for your return and post. Hope you stay and keep us all company. Rick |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nice to read you again..and you have not lost one bit of your talent. I can FEEL this poem. One of your best Kit.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kit, Life's toughest times are often the hardest to bring closure to. Seems this is closure gift wrapped with a bow. How thorough and well expressed, all indications of a closure of significant value. And thank you for sharing. Peace. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh so perfect! Patricia |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
closure...It's a must--and it must come in it's own time! It was time, I guess... enjoyed... hugs, g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I have so missed reading your wonderful poetry. I'm glad you are back. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah Kit...better late than never What an absolutely beautiful piece this is and perfect in both meter and rhyme. Seems as though the dam of words has finally broken loose. Looking forward to more of your beautiful poetry.Ruth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Kit...I'm sorry I've not seen this until now, but so happy that your spirit touched mine this morning with this glorious poem. I so understand and appreciate the depth of what you have said here. It makes me proud, very proud, of you. |
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