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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-06-08 06:20 AM

Safely from a distance
perched upon the cool stones
she gazes at her
in silent admiration

   she rests peacefully
   cradled in dawns arms

and then,
slightly yawning
she stirs with first
sleepy breath of morning

slowly exhaling
sending soft ripples
across the perfect stillness
of her soul.

She hears the winds
as they mock her
in lucid reflection

how they tease her,
tantalizing her
to awaken

gently lapping
against the smoothness
of her curves

coaxing her

into blissful
grand awakening

and like a voyeur
she watches
as she wakens
to embrace the tide

greedily swallowing
the fury of swell
taking it deeply
into her belly
in soft rise
and fall

then subtly
receding
in perpetual motion
that sways her
to complacency.....

She rises from the rock
feeling as though
she had invaded
something private,

  something sacred

      yet privileged...

and as she turns to go
she hears her whispering
her melodical tune

and glances back
with slight smile
knowing that she will return
to her azure lure
  again soon...
     very soon....

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-06-08 06:25 AM

Enjoyed...James

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-06-08 08:18 AM

I so, look forward to reading you
this was magnficant...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-06-08 10:22 AM

Your azure words were highly alluring! Donna, I have immensely enjoyed reading your poetry over the years ~ and you get better with each passing one of them! A gorgeous penning, m'friend! Absolutely GORGEOUS!!!

Giving you a big hug-o-love,

Linda

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

4 posted 2007-06-08 01:31 PM

I fear I'm a little too thick to really get this, but I really liked it. A very sensual read for me, one that will linger in my thoughts today.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-06-10 06:52 PM

beautiful. truly

again beautiful

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-06-11 06:01 AM

Thank you each for taking the time to stop by and enjoy the beautiful scenery with me. Hugs and peace to all.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-06-12 10:31 PM

maybe gentle Donna
the best "you" I have ever read

awesome

hugs

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2007-06-12 11:27 PM

Donna...the waves are lapping at your words...the tide rising and falling as I watch with you. Lovely!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2007-06-13 05:58 AM

Lady Kate,

Thank you so very much!

ahhh Martie, I knew you would see and feel her. She is beautiful yes? Hugs you.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2007-06-14 04:15 PM

I love the waters. Very nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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