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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-06-08 04:51 AM


Chill in the air
Damp summer rainy night
Fingers touch cooled skin
Slowly stripping remnants of the day
Clothes flutter to the floor
Like autumn leaves to the ground
Discarded, no longer needed
It feels like fall tonight
Aching lonely
And that chill
In the air

Wraps like a hug with no warmth

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Alison

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-06-08 06:15 AM


Nice writing...James
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2007-06-08 06:55 AM


enjoyed this view ms
LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-06-08 08:15 AM


beautifully done


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