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Open Poetry #40

You're Gone

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

0 posted 2007-06-07 07:45 PM

I know you’re gone
but how can that be
We had plans for the future
lots of things, for you to see.

You were always the one beside me
in times of great despair
You loved me always deeply
even when, you weren’t quite there.

You always helped me through
the tough times that I had.
Now I’ve come to realize
that I shouldn’t be so sad

My life will go on
I’ll be happy once again
but I’ll never forget
The way it should’ve been.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-06-07 08:33 PM

Meg,

No one
you still love
is ever quite gone

Trust me

John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-06-07 08:39 PM

what an ache

I can relate to this well

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-06-08 06:14 AM

Beautiful thoughts here...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-06-08 09:06 AM

Hi, Meg.

"My life will go on
I’ll be happy once again"

~ Hold that thought! It was true for me and I will pray that it will happen for you!

Loving hug,

EA

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-06-08 09:32 AM

This brings to mind, for me, the terrible loss of the young lady in Kansas City this week, and her boyfriend's loss of her. Very sad.

And your poem is sadly lovely.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-06-08 09:42 AM

that's right, life does go on

beautiful write

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

7 posted 2007-06-10 05:11 PM

I agree with John.

Though it is hard to see that for quite a time.

Sad poem, Meg, but lovely in its sadness.

Alison

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-06-12 01:57 PM

beautiful. Life is like this. beautiful truth.

enjoyed.

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