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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. When the dawn sun Not yet ready Remains in contemplation And the lone dove calls To someone there We can not see I will meet you And together we’ll listen To our own hearts beating Sound of acorns Shells falling Through leaves . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my birth month...yes in awe |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
sent me speechless. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very romantic...to hear heart beating. I heard many. trained to listen heart beating. but I found no romance there. I found it in your poem. as beautiful as always. This one is softly whispered out. very soft in a the quiet evening. wow, no more words |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Exquisite! A mome ~ and a poem ~ to remember! Love & October Light, EA |
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