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Los Canos de Meca [mountain, forest, and beach]
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Los Canos de Meca [mountain, forest, and beach] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Los Canos de Meca [mountain, forest, and beach] cobalt sky fading in amber and amethyst… sunset weaving soft-crimson dreams… mountain silhouettes dancing dark-forest tunes… blue moon rising in frosted stars… hushed waves sculpting quick-silver sands… footprints following tracks of Time!... ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love all the color imagery! Blue moon...now, as I hum a tune from another time, my mind sinks my toes into wet sand memories of my beloved Pacific coast. I found a photo of Los Canos.  http://canos-de-meca.costasur.com/images/categories/index.jpg |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Fine minimilism! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a very pleasant read. Like me, you're surrounded by things to write about. That's a very good thing. Bobby |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautfiful writing A |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
HI! Really a nice piece of work! I'd look at the last stanza, as the footprints in the sand of time thing doesn't quite hold up to the fresh imagery of all that precedes. That's the only thing I can see that needs a little fix in a fine piece. Best, Jim |
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quietness4you New Member
since 2007-06-07
Posts 3 |
indeed, good. rich but not many words. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
Very beautiful!! Beautiful imagery, descriptiveness. Wonderful. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
love this. another beautiful one. and one of the few has no bracket at the middle. love this. as beautiful as always enjoyed |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
indeed minimalist poet and yet full of pictures and sound excellent! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Enjoyed reading this again, and again... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bruce, I was interrupted when I went to respond to this poem a few days ago... thank you for your beautiful brush! |
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