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The Soil We Till
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The Soil We Till |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Soil We Till The furrows we plow quite often ends In crooked and twisted tufted bends We cannot clear all roots afield The past disrupts the plow we wield We till the soil and blade the seeds Where grow the shafts of daily deeds Nurture the wheat of fantacy But Kismet thrives On legacy We farm in our given lot of time Our very substance the enzyme And happenstance the wind of stir Makes for us a misty blur We share it in different portions Each soul weighing separate notions And each decipher states its act To us it seems chaoitic fact But chaos is the soup of bake and We've yet to see, what it will make [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-06-2007 11:11 PM).] |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Greetings, I'm very new to this site. I've read several of your poems and like them very much. This one was great but I just didn't get the line "but Kismet thrives the boyancy", it seems a bit off theme. Am I reading it wrong? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RogueandPoet Thank you for the comment and I changed it to legacy. Perhaps easer to understand. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you dear. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sir, I call this is philosophical poem. very good, truly. seems everything is under control in chaos. enjoyed as always have a wonderful morning with tea, Sir Tabin!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a beautiful poem. We are just part of Nature's grand scheme ~ and if Nature is a gardener like me -- chaos will reign. You have me thinking with this one. A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marvelous message, Mr. T.! May your fields be forever fertile and your soupsoup a treat to eat!  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel My angel is in good humor today.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And happenstance the wind of stir Makes for us a misty blur" good morning Sir Sy this tastes good with coffee |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
A very beautiful poem, with some wonderful thoughts in it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Enjoy both,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paullallady Thank you for the read and reply. |
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