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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-06-06 01:09 PM


Eve was almost out of detergent

and the issues between her and Howard

               were too urgent

to deal with their resurgent emotions alone

            but Howard's phone

kept giving her a busy tone

could he be entertaining another scoop of ice cream more than willing to fill his cone

               with happiness

                  impossible

Howard was her popcicle

besides, Howard was needy not greedy

                    her Edy's

                  was enough



                                                                        love,

                                                                        eve





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Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
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1 posted 2007-06-06 04:28 PM


Howardtsu,

Two enjoyable gems, way funny.

Bobby

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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2 posted 2007-06-06 07:42 PM


Absolutely adorable, loved it.
howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-06-09 02:24 PM


thanks robert  

thanks ladylisa  

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