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Open Poetry #40
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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-06-05 12:24 PM


                  to her naked eye i'm sweet and kind

but when it comes to judging me her heart is harder than the hardest diamond that's ever been mined

and she'll never let me exist, not even in the furthest reaches of the happy regions of her mind

but looking past her "Milky Way" is the only source for reasons to exist  i've been able to find

                                          so far



                                                                           love,

                                                                           howard
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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-08 01:04 AM

very profound. woman does judge like this.

enjoyed
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-06-08 08:44 AM

You truly do come across to this reader as "sweet and kind". If she doesn't have room in her heart for you, she is missing out on a gem.


EA
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3 posted 2007-06-08 03:41 PM


howardtsu
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4 posted 2007-06-09 03:10 PM

thanks guys    

you're too sweet and kind earth angel    
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