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greeneggs-n-ham
Junior Member

since 2007-06-05

Posts 14

0 posted 2007-06-05 04:46 PM

Phoenix
He admires the creature
from head to its tail
Such power and strength
Yet graceful and frail

A small flame arises
So cozy and warm
the creature the fire
they mean him no harm

Flickering dancing
a frightening show
Creeping and climbing
the flame starts to grow

Singeing and burning
the billowing smoke
clouds eyes and clogs lungs
cough sputter choke

The creature consumed
Its burned at the stake
And to the reality
of life he awakes

Screaming and crying
the creature does wail
he weeps for the death
of the creature so frail

Yet full of such beauty
now burned to the ground
its small voice is silenced
the fire abounds

Beauty and wonder
so 'jestic and grand
Now only ashes
burnt finer than sand

A pile of sorrow
left by the flames
of the glorious creature
tis all that remains

Drowned by the sadness
dead in the ash
like posion thru veins
his teeth grind and gnash

But up from the ashes
does something arise
a new baby creature
utters new little cries

Ashes of sorrow
from wince it once came
born in new beauty
a picture to frame

New life springs from death
and joy from old sorrow
that grace may abound
at least til the morrow

The answer to the myst'ry
He never shall know
but from the ash in his life
doth love overflow

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-05 05:55 PM

life is good and new life is better.

this a very beautiful one.

love to read

welcome to the wonderful place of PIP.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-06-05 07:58 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-06-05 09:01 PM

Welcome to PiP .. an interesting poetic story you presented~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-06-06 03:23 PM

I really enjoyed the flow and cadence in this piece, and seeing your pen name made me smile as I recall to mind a very dear friend who also enjoys greeneggs'n'ham. Welcome to Pip, I will be looking forward to more from your pen.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2007-06-06 04:09 PM

It always thrills me to see such thought and writing. Welcome to PIPtalk! I hope you'll enjoy the blue pages as much as I have. There are amazing people here.

miscellanea

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2007-06-07 12:27 PM

Welcome to PIP!!!!

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

7 posted 2007-06-10 06:36 PM

wow.. i also love the phoenix, the comfort of knowing that fresh new things come from the old, and frail. nice write by the way

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