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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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i cant promise you anything but i offer you a plentiful amount of skipping stones judging by the gentle ebb and flow of the tide it seems that me and you share a special place somewhere among the distant, endless stars that sweep across the cold horizon when i find myself swimming in a lake on a dark night by myself everyday without you i long for the end of this world and all the people in it so me and you can be together again i could bring you a flower to prove it or cast my stone into the blue moonlit water and watch as it skips away from me while, lo and behold, you remain in my mind always a part of me always there you are the most wonderful disease i have ever had i draw strength from the orange and the kiwi in the throes of your spirit nevertheless, the sky will fall and the sun shall burst and the universe will take a deep breath and collapse into itself again the stone will sink fast into the lake where i shall sit on the edge of the dock and watch the most glorious sunrise appear through the mist waiting for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleScorpion LOL take a book to read, she may be a while getting ready. Enjoyed the read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"i long for the end of this world and all the people in it so me and you can be together again" I feel ya |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are the most wonderful disease i have ever had i draw strength from the orange and the kiwi in the throes of your spirit nevertheless, the sky will fall and the sun shall burst and the universe will take a deep breath and collapse into itself again the stone will sink fast into the lake where i shall sit on the edge of the dock and watch the most glorious sunrise appear through the mist waiting for you Beautiful |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
EagleScorpion, this is a keeper for me  I am pleased that I didn't miss this gem!*~coco~* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, bless your romantic sweet soul! Your words left me breathless ~ and wanting to read more! Uniquely creative phrasing! I loved this! So good to read your poetry again! Don't be such a stranger! Loving Light, EA  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
what a beautiful read! RDB |
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