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| Open Poetry #40 |
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and yet another shrug |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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So what if the sun won't shine? So what if it shines too bright? Either way-- I'm blind, ain't I? |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Got a rope? Get one... Ready... ? See see, my playmate, come out and play with me. And bring your dollies three, climb up my apple tree. Slide down my rainbow into my cellar door, and we'll be jolly friends, for ever more, more, more. So sorry playmate, I cannot play with you. My dollies have the flu, boo hoo hoo hoo hoo hoo! I have no rainbow, I have no cellar door, but we'll be jolly friends, forever more, more, more. Okay... How about... Did you ever see a Lassie... A Lassie, a Lassie... Did you ever see a Lassie... Go this way and that? Go this way and that way and that way and this way... ::smiles:: (((Serenity))) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I guess it's too late to ask if you have a strong arm?....   love you too |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Oh man. I remember See, See. My mom taught me that when I was younger- My dad was a professional bowler, so they had to have some way of entertaining me on the weekend bowling trips. We used to play See, See and roll bowling balls back and forth to each other. My mom was my best friend. Karen, Again, wonderful. Something for me to think about as I squint into the clouds on my way to my exam.. which starts in 10 minutes. Love. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
dear SB, did you get enough sleep? you are very right. we can not live in dark because we have eyes so we want to see. we can not live in too brightness because there is limitation on our retina to sense the light...and there is a build-in protection system to protect our sight....to close our eyes uncontrollable by our own. your poem is brilliant ...that is the human essence. more or less is bad. but the balance points varies individually. brilliant again. have a wonderful day, dear SB. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
. sunlight burning sky dross from thoughts of dreamland's cast ideas unfinished . |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This made me laugh....i like this a lot....very quotable. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...enough sleep... *shrug* There's always tomorrow. And dear Drauntz...life is so seldom balanced, that staying level instead of fluid might actually handicap one--especially when life is turned upside down. *shrug again* There was a lot more to this one, but I only liked the last four lines. Sometimes the summation'll do.  Thanks for reading!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
'Bout how I'm feelin'......hiya Ser.....miss ya........jojo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
That Charlie and his wonderful new words. "Dross", yes that is what gets in the way... lol If we do not allow ourselves to feel we do not grow. Flowers do not grow well in the dark either, and you my dear are a flower in process, progressing at your own speed.. A long budding time because you are so busy learning and sharing. Flower: 2.best of anything,the best part or example; the finest most vigorous period, state of blooming or flourishing. Call yourself a late bloomer but oh! what a flower you will be.. love ya, martyjo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Either that or you like the "dark?" Hmmm, I have to go to bed and think on this one. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you this morning... our rains have dissipated for a bit... now it's winds turn to play havoc... and the sun? Well, I could be blind, but I swore she winked.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
all I can say is you leave me hanging...and wanting more like a marvelous coffee break |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Serenity, "So what if the sun won't shine? So what if it shines too bright? Either way-- I'm blind, ain't I?" Hype up the water power, get those water wheels a'movin. We'll make our own light, eh? Do I hear, "This little light of mine, I'm going to make it ..." playing in the background? and if the wind blows, we'll harness its power, at least steal away some air! Love the brevity and deep thought that went into your poem! Very cuhl!!!! Take care, misce' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You see more with your eyes shut than most see do with their eyes wide open. Whether the sun is shining on you or not, you have your own!  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn girlie I love your mood I'm there! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
blind is something you ain't leastwise not in your poetry place... |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A shrug? you say? Is that the same as a slough [sluff] Adagio |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and, in the valley of the blind, the one-eyed man is king |
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