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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
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0 posted 2007-06-04 01:23 PM



I take you in
as I can see that I am soon
to lose the grip on your hand
that keeps me focused and on path.
Once you let go
I will start falling
unable to stop
I will reach out to you
but you won't be there.

I take you in

as I know

you are soon to leave

and the life that I knew

will end
for all time

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-06 03:15 AM


Very sad and very lovely.

A

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