Open Poetry #40 |
In the Silence |
Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
Sitting here thinking of you is all I can seem to do In the silence, memories arise and love warms my heart Distance is blocked to sight but not of feeling this feeling is real, is pure, is true My love is greater in each day we push through When you are in the silence of the day, think of me For I am thinking of you Silence is a place we can be together In my heart do I feel your presence in the silence of the day ** I wrote this today and it goes out to my hubby* |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
He will treasure every word that you write to him. Keep it up -- I find writing to be my release ~ it often soothes me. Thank you for sharing this with us. A |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
aziza thanks for all your comments. You've been real supportive. Thanks alot |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Silence is a place we can be together In my heart do I feel your presence in the silence of the day" Heartfelt sentiment. Nice write. (Expand more on the emotion the emptiness of silence, yet the necessity to be part of it). Enjoyed "In Silence" JL "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
silence is a good place to be sometimes I try to go there as much as I can nice poem |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
Emotions are the strongest memories. Beautiful. |
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