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One Last Breath
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One Last Breath |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
Your hands they tremble, your eyes fill with tears, my heart aches, i feel your pain, you smile and gently wipe your eyes, try to cover the pain, it wont go away, i try to run but my legs fall beneath me, i fall, heart barely beating, i breathe, take one more breath, cant hold on, my pain slowly fades away, with one last breath i say i love you, grab for your hand, to weak, im just a memory. ** this is really old, its one of the first poems i wrote.** |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like it. A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write. JL  "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
very sad yet tender |
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