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The Waiting Game |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Spouses left behind Creasing love letters Touch stones in the pocket Wiping tears, facing the day Whispering to the moon Wishing on the stars Starting each day like yesterday Kissing small faces once, then twice Breakfast cereal in waiting bowls Lonely beds at night Pillows damp with tears Calendars X’ed day by day Life goes on Yet time stands still ... Alison ~ To Forever In Love ~ |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
I really like this. I feel like this relates to me in soo many ways |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is a very good, truly beautiful one. I love "Life goes on Yet time stands still" you are very kind to write for her. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Creasing love letters Touch stones in the pocket" beautiful Alison love the touch stones |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply exquisite! GRAND applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for being wonderful readers and for becoming people I think of as 'friends' Alison |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
Thank you for writing this for me. I really apreciate it. Its a great poem! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Forever in Love You are most welcome. I have thought of you today ~ you are in place where you will be embraced. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is beautiful, and tender, yet sad too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Dixie, paullallady and James Thank you all. Alison |
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