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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2007-05-30 11:55 AM



Set-Of-Sail
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Windy
Sweet grace in swirl
Set-of-sail on new sea
Billow my heart ever-forward
Until I am where life would have me be
Silence-in-tow now surrounds me
New shore comes into view
Tides of surround
Windy~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2007-05-30 11:57 AM


May your days of sailing be smooth one sweet lady.  This is lovely!
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2 posted 2007-05-30 12:07 PM


applause!!

I especially LOVE:

         "Set-of-sail on new sea
      Billow my heart ever-forward
Until I am where life would have me be
   Silence-in-tow now surrounds me"

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3 posted 2007-05-30 12:35 PM


I have missed the wind myself

another beauty of a write

JL
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4 posted 2007-05-30 05:22 PM


Excellent poetry!

JL

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5 posted 2007-05-30 06:00 PM


I can picture you setting sail on those whispering winds dear Marge.
Love you, Nancy

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6 posted 2007-05-30 08:52 PM


"silence-in-tow"

I like that line, especially. Silence can be so powerful...

A most lovely thought, Marge!

Enjoyed.

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7 posted 2007-05-30 10:17 PM


  Marge, this is beautiful.   ...jo
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8 posted 2007-05-31 02:08 AM


Marge or Marge
sails quietly into whispering
too windy outside

right?

enjoyed your another beautiful poem

have a wonderful day.

hugs ans kisses


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2007-05-31 08:57 AM



Gentle thankee's to all~

The winds have been fairly consistent and unusual for Florida this time of year~

I'm doing a vacationing hiatus at the beachside and find that my thoughts have set sail to gently take me whichever way the wind blows~

How beautiful are these times of new discovery~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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