Open Poetry #40 |
Set-Of-Sail |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Set-Of-Sail ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Windy Sweet grace in swirl Set-of-sail on new sea Billow my heart ever-forward Until I am where life would have me be Silence-in-tow now surrounds me New shore comes into view Tides of surround Windy~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
May your days of sailing be smooth one sweet lady. This is lovely! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
applause!! I especially LOVE: "Set-of-sail on new sea Billow my heart ever-forward Until I am where life would have me be Silence-in-tow now surrounds me" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have missed the wind myself another beauty of a write |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent poetry! JL "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can picture you setting sail on those whispering winds dear Marge. Love you, Nancy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"silence-in-tow" I like that line, especially. Silence can be so powerful... A most lovely thought, Marge! Enjoyed. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, this is beautiful. ...jo |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Marge or Marge sails quietly into whispering too windy outside right? enjoyed your another beautiful poem have a wonderful day. hugs ans kisses |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gentle thankee's to all~ The winds have been fairly consistent and unusual for Florida this time of year~ I'm doing a vacationing hiatus at the beachside and find that my thoughts have set sail to gently take me whichever way the wind blows~ How beautiful are these times of new discovery~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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