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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-05-29 09:35 PM



Mystery


oh mystery
unsolved me
a luster cast
in shadows
the place I lack
in loneliness
a blank page
escaped in words
tumbling around
inside my head
a dull mass
turned to
polished rock

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2007-05-29 09:45 PM


Mystery


oh mystery
unsolved me
a luster cast
in shadows
the place I lack

in loneliness
a blank page
escaped in words
tumbling around

inside my head
a dull mass . . .
turned to
polished stone


Helen,


"turned to
polished stone"

Rock you're not . . .

John


.


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-30 12:21 PM


a beautiful one and a true Mystery caught my mind.. polished logic thought into a dull mass.

enjoyed reading.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
3 posted 2007-05-30 01:10 AM


Said with beauty...and polish.




Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2007-05-30 07:03 AM


ms slick
my mind is sand there
at your mystery place

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2007-05-30 07:05 AM


a sad ache so beautifully written Helen.  Lovely writing.
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2007-05-30 10:26 AM


How sad!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2007-05-30 12:46 PM


you are beautiful, 'nuff said
The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2007-06-01 09:26 PM




"a blank page
escaped in words"

love it Helen


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