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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2007-05-29 08:51 PM

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How he rises so—
Dives and glides
At will

If he must fall
As must all
Let it be
Still in the sky

Unbroken
By what
Is then below

The air  
Sunlight
On his wings


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-30 12:29 PM

Dear John, I shall fold you into a iPod so any time I can enjoy a beautiful tune from you.

It is truly an honor to talk and to joke at a living poet...what a wonderful privilege.

may you have a very good night, Sir Pawlik.

I have to say that this one belongs to one of your best.
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-05-30 07:48 AM

very pleasant and most fine!

Applause!!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
3 posted 2007-05-30 08:02 AM

John, one of your best ever. I'm printing this one for my favorite poems folder.  Well done, sir.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2007-05-30 12:44 PM

wishing I had that same spirit
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