Open Poetry #40 |
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That Lovin' Feelin' |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
That Lovin' Feelin' I've lost that loving feeling, unsure it can be brought back. Wondering the "ifs" and "maybes" and if the future will still the lack. A kiss is just a kiss most days, with deeper meanings hid. But I've lost that loving feeling as I reference the " forbid." In my mind I'm finished, but tell my body so. Release those old and tired thoughts that keep love in escrow. I'm waiting for those feelings, the kind that show their face. The feedback, phrases distanced only by words held in their place. One needs to hear them often though body languaged can speak meanings dreamt of tinted rose through glasses in times of weak. I've lost that loving feeling, waiting for the heartprints stay. The cure I know will seed itself in the real of you someday. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Yes there is always someday. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As Arnold said "That loving feeling will be back."...or was it "I'll be back"...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*smile* I swear that song is playing right now... and "bring back that lovin' feeling!" sigh oh, that lovin' feelin'? Huge hugs, mo. ![]() And I mean this in such a good way--but it is hard to believe such words, knowing you... Wow..guess what is playing now? "Happy Together" *grin* Yep. I'm a dweeb. ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, I sure understand this. I think that loving feeling is long gone from me, too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never know ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Righteous Brothers circa 1964" Timeless in your expressed sentiment, and so well penned. Great write!! JL ![]() Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its all about the ebbs and the flows it will come again somehow sometime live love laugh in the interim |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
In my mind I'm finished, but tell my body so. Release those old and tired thoughts that keep love in escrow." What a neat way of saying that. I like the feeling I get from reading this. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
oh i doubt its gone, just went AWOL for a minute I am the little cracked mirror |
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