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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-05-28 01:58 PM



That Lovin' Feelin'

I've lost that loving feeling,
unsure it can be brought back.
Wondering the "ifs" and "maybes"
and if the future will still the lack.

A kiss is just a kiss most days,
with deeper meanings hid.
But I've lost that loving feeling
as I reference the " forbid."

In my mind I'm finished,
but tell my body so.
Release those old and tired thoughts
that keep love in escrow.

I'm waiting for those feelings,
the kind that show their face.
The feedback, phrases distanced only
by words held in their place.

One needs to hear them often
though body languaged can speak
meanings dreamt of tinted rose
through glasses in times of weak.

I've lost that loving feeling,
waiting for the heartprints stay.
The cure I know will seed itself
in the real of you someday.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-05-28 05:03 PM


Maureen,
Yes there is always someday.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-28 05:44 PM


As Arnold said "That loving feeling will be back."...or was it "I'll be back"...James
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-05-28 09:41 PM


*smile*

I swear that song is playing right now...

and "bring back that lovin' feeling!"

sigh

oh, that lovin' feelin'?

Huge hugs, mo.

And I mean this in such a good way--but it is hard to believe such words, knowing you...

Wow..guess what is playing now?

"Happy Together"

*grin*

Yep. I'm a dweeb.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2007-05-29 01:48 AM


Maureen, I sure understand this. I think that loving feeling is long gone from me, too.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2007-05-29 01:52 AM


never know

things don't stay gone long and seem to come around again when you least expect

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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6 posted 2007-05-29 10:01 AM


"Righteous Brothers circa 1964"

Timeless in your expressed sentiment, and so well penned.

Great write!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2007-05-29 03:07 PM


its all about the ebbs and the flows
it will come again
somehow sometime
live love laugh
in the interim

gmcooper
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since 2007-05-30
Posts 47

8 posted 2007-05-30 10:37 PM


In my mind I'm finished,
but tell my body so.
Release those old and tired thoughts
that keep love in escrow."

What a neat way of saying that. I like the feeling I get from reading this.

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
9 posted 2007-05-31 08:44 PM


oh i doubt its gone, just went AWOL for a minute

I am the little cracked mirror

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