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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-05-27 07:13 PM


My Wish

I wish that I could never see,
the place where no one's soul is free,
where minds are lost to endless pain
from earthly lives that had no gain.

I've touched this place and feel I know
the depths that lurk for us below,
where all is lost in darkest night,
with spirits drowned in mindless plight.

My wish though, it can never be,
for this is not my destiny.
With others I descend to hell
to help lost souls to break their spell.

So I will wish for better times
for those poor souls who've lost their minds
and wish that thoughts from you and me,
again will help the blind to see.

For thought is Soul, and Soul is Mind,
so spare a thought for all you find.
The power of Good is in your hand,
your prayers are 'wishes' in this land.

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-05-27 08:45 PM


Ivor,
Can't help but agree with you on this one.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-27 08:53 PM


agree with both of you. Yes, you always wish out best wishes for the world.

"The power of Good is in your hand,
your prayers are 'wishes' in this land." love  these.

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