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Open Poetry #40

If only, if.....

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-05-26 04:39 PM

If only,if....

If only if, we didn’t cry,
when someone poked us in the eye.

If only if, we didn’t weep,
when someone hurt us really deep.

If only if, we used our brains,
maybe we would save some pains.

If only if, we wore a smile,
then we’d be happy all the while.

If only if, we tried our best,
we’d be successful in each test.

If only if, we found a home,
then we would never have to roam.

If only if, we loved this life,
then we’d be free from cares and strife.

If only if, we played our part,
and treated others with our heart.

If only if, the world was one,
with hate and prejudice all gone.

Then all mankind would get along,
.....if only ‘all’ would sing this song.

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-05-26 04:48 PM

Ivor,
"If only if"

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-26 05:30 PM

a very nice dream, sir. I like to read your dream and they are my dreams too.

beautiful.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-05-27 02:15 PM

I'm joining you in song!

Keep on singing ~ and smiling!

Peace & Harmony,

Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2007-05-27 02:41 PM

A very thought provoking poem that stirs
the imagination very smoothly, thank you.

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

5 posted 2007-05-27 03:02 PM

If only some one would steal all our reasons for working and living we could all just die in peace.

When I poke someone in the eye I expect them to cry (or poke back)

Unfortunately when I study hard for an exam I dont always "expect" to pass.... thats half the fun....

What are the words to that song again "Clone a Sheep" Baaa Baaa Baaa Baaa

Eric

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