Open Poetry #40 |
A Gentle Storm |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sleep eludes me these early mornings and most days I watch them become early afternoons with no sign of rain. Just once, I wish, just once it would begin raining when I wouldn't miss it. How good that would feel like fingers lightly, slowly running through my hair where I would drift off into slumber with more than thoughts to hold me warm. My heart aches for you and for just one early morning that carries a gentle storm. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, A delightful read. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a beautiful poem from such a soft heart. and a light hearted tune. I love this poem. I want to hear your calm words. have a wonderful weekend, dear passing. many hugs. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie, may the rains fall gently upon your window and bring you your hearts desire. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
She lay there in gentle sleep, softly the rain fell, sleep bringing her dreams and a smile to her face. I watched, happy to share moments with the soothing chore of rain drops and the presence of beauty. Today was a good day. Dear Dixie, again enjoyed the read my friend, have a terrific day. Rick |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"How good that would feel like fingers lightly, slowly running through my hair" I love your rain Dixie felt it |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am glad you are still here -- who else would feed my Dixie addiction. This is so lovely ... thank you. A |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely, Dixie girl! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Early morning rain.... such refreshing sweetness. May it be yours soon, Dixie. Thank you for the write. MoonShadow . |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Such a gentle read that touches. Dinah |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. There's no doubt You're good . . . John . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I can feel the emotion in this write; like the building of a gentle storm. Great write... JL "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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UpBeat New Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 1 |
Very nice! |
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