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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-05-26 01:45 PM


           should i retire from writing poetry

when i’m ready for you to flow with me?

         were you born to never “go with me”?

would I be reborn knowing that glowingly

you read my poetry, yet unknowingly

thought i was the type of guy

who'd pipe down if your "gateways" to happiness were too shy to tell my Gateway

                          you care?            

    

                                                                love,

                                                                howard



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-26 05:56 PM


nice. to Eve or another girl?

give up poem for a girl? no. A good girl will make you write more.

enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-26 10:48 PM


Enjoyed...James
howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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3 posted 2007-06-02 02:45 PM


i guess she's a good girl  

thanks drauntz  

thanks james  

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