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child of time
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child of time |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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white hot paranormal recoats the mouth of time wet ricocheting sensations dance the unexplained self discovery forgives charade who cuts the hair of fate? on night sky's city orange graffiti swathing black sky drizzling eyes of lovesick fools champagne dreams lengthens stride of out of body experience windfallen stelettos find another dimension new meanings to words lifelong fears out of water passion lay naked with deepest desires toe to toe racy versions of tropical isles a glint of humor in divorced widows reading romance novels knowing exactly why they're alone and smile expectations never fall in love imagination runs wild immortal awakenings become human hours taking me to the outer limits of your powers erotic silence laced with some emotional connection discoveries a profecy of belief sprawled out against a mission of the male side of my mind magic butterflies guard thoughts of mischievous love mysterious powerful looking over the top of mountains a story begins despite expression on times of circumstance expectations are naughty cupids looking for revenge diamonds are a girl's best friend and I've seen them bouncing on top the ocean when my imagination runs wild fate becomes a supernatural thriller twilight tales the soul mate I feel inside my heart amber changes of the breathe of woman tasting my desires… you are my diamond to dance with this stranger this white shadow of forever reborn into dreams into life's magic making history life the love of time that sparkling glimmer or' the ocean's waves diamonds of time sing songs of love and praise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You out did yourself with this one, excellent.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many fine and interesting lines and images! such as: “ricocheting sensations”; “who cuts the hair of fate?”; “champagne dreams”; mischievous, mysterious, powerful ‘love’ looking over mountain tops!; …cupids looking for revenge!; “diamonds of time” and, I especially love: “to dance with this stranger this white shadow of forever reborn into dreams into life's magic making history” sustained applause!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"life the love of time that sparkling glimmer or' the ocean's waves diamonds of time sing songs of love and praise" Oh so beautiful. Gosh Lee J, you could melt a guy’s heart with words like that. Mine is feeling awful squishy right now. HUG!  JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed. ~Jesus Christ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Another delight for my morning reading! Much enjoyed this Lee. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lee, I kept thinking ~ this line is my favorite ~ No, this one is. The entire poem is my favorite line. Wonderful, just wonderfully well written. It was like images that I could taste, smell and feel -- and I felt them. Oh, I did feel them. Alison |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a pleasure to read your wise words~ have missed them~ My spirit will rise |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah... this time I captured a favorite LeeJ "expectations never fall in love" well spoken |
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