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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
At the edge of life I stand in awe of the coming dawn Colors there in sapphire hues Shades of purples and cerulean blues Is this the end of perfection morn Where midnight songs from dreams were born? The techno buttons pushed askew ask the question why don’t you? And in answer we say just because we can because we must Tomorrow’s dawn may not come in spatial time for all to see Who will we blame this demise? Blaming you? Blaming me? Can perfection of time and space be left alone here in this place Step back seems to hard to do What is this world coming to? Out of time out of care take back the dawn if you dare Give the generations on their way one more reason to greet break of day |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhh how pretty a song...really really an uplifting positive write....made me want to go hug everyone, even my boss...(yuck)  seriously, I loved this thank you |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this a a very beautiful poem. very beautiful. love the ending question. enjoyed. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I agree. Very beautiful! ~Love ~Terry |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow! A new style, a new rhythm to suit the message of this piece! wow. Loved it--love you! (and dare I ask for more?)  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Since I had grandkids, the damage we are doing to this earth has become the most important thing I face each day, as it concerns me for their sake. So sad. A great poem and a very important message - loved it. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for reading my poor attempt to make a statement...for some reason it hit me as I watched the fires here in Florida that there is only one earth..it's our home and it's all we've got!! So unless they open up Jupiter for condos, we're stuck here so we better take care of it!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I watch the news every morning, Sharon, and think the same thoughts...wondering how and if the next generations will be able to enjoy this earth. Nice to read you, M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetDeVine~ Condos on Jupiter ... what a wonderful thought~ Yep ... we've got this one Heaven we call EARTH .. and we treat her as a red-headed stepchild~ Praying we will learn so that others may be taught~ Nice to see you penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hi Sharon! It is so good to see you posting, again. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Poet de Vine, That should be a "too" in: "Step back seems to hard to do" aa in: "Step back seems too hard to do" Might as well get it right. Bobby |
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