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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-05-24 09:14 AM

There comes a time,
when all logic and reason is lost,
actions happen without forethought.

When sanity becomes insanity,
tiredness of life, rountine,
what you wouldn't do, you do.

Something pushes you beyond,
boundaries set, emotions
run wild, overwhelming you.

Then you try to make sense of it all,
was it anger, resentment, expression
of freedom, longing to get out?

Sometimes this is a paradox,
it could be for the better,
or it could work for the worse.

Choosing to do nothing,
you become numb, nothing,
without new experiances.

Sometimes it is a mistake made,
lessons learned, for future
reference.

Sometimes it becomes the right
choice, working to the good,
a new job, a new relationship.

It all comes to one thing,
choice, what you do with it,
life is all about the choices
we make.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-05-24 09:17 AM

you sumed it up perfectly in the last paragraph...outstanding write...enjoyed

I loved this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-05-24 07:49 PM

You got that right...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-05-24 08:05 PM

nice uplifting poem

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

4 posted 2007-05-24 08:08 PM

this is such a straightforward, intelligent piece of writing. great job.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2007-05-24 11:33 PM

so very true, well penned.
~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-24 11:52 PM

you are so right, so very right.

Good poem

enjoyed.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2007-05-25 09:22 PM

'Life' does eventually 'get away from us all'!

I believe this is the very best 'write' I have seen
from this author! [MUCH here to think about and enjoy!]

sustained applause!!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2007-05-26 12:51 PM

Very true!

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