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openthoughts
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0 posted 2007-05-24 12:26 PM


Locks

I do not care
For the locks
Or latches on doors,
Since purpose and use
Are vastly different.
What's made for locking out
Does little good
If trapping in.

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-24 06:38 PM


this is a very good poem and a very good philosophy here. Very right, to lock out and to lock in are all bad. and very funny.

a short poem but a long lesson.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-05-24 08:12 PM


yep

that's true

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-05-25 03:46 AM


I guess it depends on which side of the door you happen to find yourself...



I like the way you think!

LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-05-25 08:32 AM


very true...
trey_c
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since 2007-05-24
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5 posted 2007-05-25 08:59 AM


nice thought for the day...
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2007-05-25 09:15 AM


interesting point!

P.S.:  I really like your choice of 'P.I.P.'
       "UserName" (ID)!

Applause!!

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