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Just One
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Just One If I say I'm all right, don't believe me - You can see all the grief in my eyes As I come every time when you need me, Every time in a different guise. My heart frets every time as I see you, And the blood turns so cold in my veins. No, love, I won't try to deceive you - Just for you I wake up every day, Just to you leads the way I have chosen, Just for you I'll be strong till the end, Just for you beats this heart, once so frozen, Heart of scars... now it's just in your hands. You're my savior and my salvation, You're my sweetest escape and my shield, Of my dreams you're the one incarnation, And to just one temptation I yield. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Purely heart. I'm so glad you wrote today! |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Very heartfelt. A lot of powerful emotion here. well done. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a poem of true love, like a good wine. beautiful and touching. enjoyed. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
(sigh). This is a great piece. Such love, and truth. Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a pleasant-fine 'write'! P.S. if I have not mentioned this previously?!: that is a wonderful "P.I.P." UserName (ID) you chose! applause!! |
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