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Open Poetry #40

Indian Moon

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

0 posted 2007-05-22 11:16 AM

The night was so beautiful,
moon full and oddly colored.

As I drove to what was inevitable doom,
it soothed me inside.

I had been told stories by my Mother,
of this wonderful sight in the sky.

I knew it would be the night,
that my Mother would die.

When I reached her she was unaware,
not knowing any in sight.

Yet she turned to me slowly,
uttered I Love You.

I always knew this,
through all the good and bad days.

But especially on the nights,
we shared the moon and stars.

The Indian Moon still comes,
and her spirit is still alive.

I feel her beside me,
but especially on those nights.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-05-22 11:19 AM

Welcome to Pip Lisa. One can feel your heart in your words. Nicely done.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-05-22 11:34 AM

Welcome to the blue pages...looking forward to reading more of you
Keep writing, this was soothing and mystical..

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-23 01:15 AM

a beautiful song for mother and a beautiful poem for us to enjoy. full of emotions.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

4 posted 2007-05-28 10:56 AM

Thank you all for you feedback. This was written because it actually occurred. Needed to express it. Thank you.

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