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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 When my venom spills into the wound I inflicted know my heart is not conflicted there is no question that the poison spewed has sincere intention to express I could not possibly hate you any less ~SEA~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
quite a remarkably powerful 'write'! I write on some 'detached' philosophical plane.... even when I do the 'dark' and 'social impact/conscience' writes....I never quite manage to achieve such fine, direct, emotive realism...as this! MUCH applause!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow. Now this startled me. All I can say is that if someone provoked this from you, they must have done something pretty bad, because you are normally such a sweet and placid soul. But even the SEA can kick up a mean tide! Hope it helped, lovie.  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
DUCK! Wow...now this made the hair on my arms stand up. Powerful write...and that person better RUN! Amy  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Well, you really should just go ahead and speak your mind~  Love the take on this one, gal~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~written with the pen of intensity!~ The hairs on my arm stood straight up reading this! Susan, this piece presents such a different SEA-scape from the gentler word-waves that tend to characterize your poetic offerings. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hate is such a destructive emotion, destroying the hater so much more than the hated, but to let it out in a poem can be very cathartic. I hope this poem freed you. No matter what, it is an excellent, power-punch poem. Wishing you peace and happiness. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Susan! This is really not like you at all...I was surprised to read! I did love it though and could relate...memories of certain people in my past...and I'm so glad they are in my past. |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Very intense, stirred up a lot of powerful emotions in me. Excellent write |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
THIS I wish I had written. Absolutely LOVED IT! jimmy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow! again like others have said...I didn't expect this...someone said to me today that forgiving is much healthier than holding onto the pain and hurt of anger or hatred from, by or for another. good writing M |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
ouch, been a long time since i have been here but i must say this was quite a shocking but great write from you. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
pretty "hate". a beautiful poem. enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gosh ... yes there might be such turbulences even in a usually placid SEA! The picture you choose is perfect with your "dark" words. Good to see your smiling eyes next to it, to find the balance. Powerful indeed! Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Glad I wasn't in the vicinity  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The twist from the expected in this reminds me of the song "Loathing" from Wicked (which I love *S*)... What a great the SEA rage you've written... though I'd hate to get caught in this storm!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, very powerful and profound...love both the pic and your words make the pic alive... waht true grit you own. Hugs Me |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
lol! Nice |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
that's kinda like saying "I wish for you a cruise ship full of gold....and it still not be enough to pay your doctor bills"..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lots of power and so well said. Alison |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sea darling girl, this is without doubt one of the most powerful pieces of writing I have ever read. I would hate to be the person this is aimed at, but OH MY how well you wrote it. I am always honest darling one, and this is truly one of your best! as always Mushy X x x x x |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
The wound lies deep - it's true, and you possess the right to bite. No tight a tourniquet will save so lost a heart as mine tonight. For all I've done - all forgot, All for you to die and rot. But at this end, I implore, Now could you love me any more? Greetings, Sea "We live our lives in rooms of the mind, rooms of the body." |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you all for the really great replies...and Topheth, hey that was excellent  good to see you around again! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whoa! I pity the person who merits your "sincere intentions"! Someone must have done you wrong ~ big time!, Sweet SEA. The power in your words darn near knocked me off my cloud! lol  Great write!!! Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Man, I'm glad I'm not on the end of the poking stick. Well done, Susan! |
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