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| Open Poetry #40 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. So then Window framed Lit by the moon Shaped lamp Those Spring Green leaves Of a single tree— The dark Blank night Holding back And yet Waiting For its poem . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
another beautiful one... "So then Window framed"...window here could mean eyes of the heart or the view on inside or outside. "Lit by the moon Shaped lamp Those Spring Green leaves"...moon or moon shape all means dream and dream by the spring beauty "Of a single tree—" single minded..there are many trees..just kidding. "The dark Blank night Holding back And yet".........even the darkness of the night is ashamed of himself of his blackness in such a romantic night "Waiting For its poem" ... poem again, ah, yes, what else can express more clearly the feelings if down could write better.. enjoyed and enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I REALLY like: "The dark Blank night Holding back And yet Waiting For its poem" sustained applause!! |
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