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bslicker
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0 posted 2007-05-21 02:28 PM


Waves Edge


edges of waves
seep into the sand
as water
recides
back to the gulf
off the shore
trying again
upon the next
wind whisper
waves
wanting
trying
to be the edges
because of the love
that remains
like a fragile heart
collecting
feelings
.
.
.
bernie
  


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2007 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-05-21 03:47 PM


beautiful. another poem of waves, edges and her.

beautiful poem. sensed something.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-05-21 07:53 PM


Oh Bernie, you express those feelings exquisitely. A metaphorical treasure!

So pleased to see you posting again!

Big hug,
Linda

Jenna
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3 posted 2007-05-22 04:33 AM


Great imagery here. A very beautiful and thought provoking poem
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-05-22 10:17 AM


Bernie, It makes me smile to see you post again, and especially with such a beautiful write as this is.  Indeed, very lovely.  
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