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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Mild onion savour, grey- blue cloud backlit brilliantly through breaks. Emerald and lemon green, new and pristine. Chaffinch repetitive call echoing to pathways, where wrens pick dog fur for nests, whirring into shaded woodland. Leaved dinosaur bones of beach, coarse, towering high and huge above younger cousin's tender lime growth. Pulsing on fragrant air, something connects it all, holds it, commands it, moves and uses it. Reason is within us, revelation around the next turn of the path? At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
"Reason is within us, revelation around the next turn of the path?" BRAVO!!! What a perfect ending to this wonderful poem...the visuals you created are filled with the colors and feelings of spring...A wonderful read...*Big Hugs* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"something connects it all," I like this poem because it is neat and clean. When I read the title, I thought that is was about food-chain. enjoyed. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Something holds it, commands it, yes, God is greater than the universe and he enjoys his wonderful complex creation. J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine, interesting 'write'! sustained applause!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nice write and great to read you again...loved this painting of life and it's many paths.... thank you |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
I love your descriptiveness and imagery. But mostly I love the style of your thoughts. It is like you are sharing this, relaying the visual. great job. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are attentive with your eyes, with your mind and with your heart. A very beautiful write, dear Goldenrose. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Leaved dinosaur bones of beach, coarse, towering high and huge above younger cousin's tender lime growth." Hello, Phil! Did you mean Beech? That is what makes sense to me by the dinosuar bones descriptor. My favorite part: "Chaffinch repetitive call echoing to pathways, where wrens pick dog fur for nests, whirring into shaded woodland." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am always moved by what your eyes and heart see ~ and by the ponderings of your phil-osophical mind.  You engage all the senses of your readers! So good to be reading the fruits of your pen once again! Loving hug, Linda |
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