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Open Poetry #40
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2007-05-19 05:33 PM



Shades of time
Never left
The orchids trail.

Children meshed
To each others shirts
Spreading laughs
As their grins
Buried pebbles along the orchids path.

Time was change
Tucked away in their souls
Tonight could be a million truths
But time wasn’t their pursuit.

The orchids nest,
The suns revelation,
Of a path gripping onto its nostalgic dirt.
© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-19 05:36 PM

You write beautifully, Truly, beautiful.

thank you

enjoyed happily
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-19 07:40 PM

Enjoyed...James
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