Essential Truths and Immutable Love

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Open Poetry #40

Essential Truths and Immutable Love

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-05-16 07:06 PM

Essential Truths and Immutable Love

When Spring is still dazed
by Winter’s indifference,
and my soul longs to squeeze all beauty
from each new blade of grass on the
  shivering hills,
my mind meanders...
(in restless-twilight memories
  beyond a furtive sunset)
through storm-fevered winds
on wilderness seas
in a world of endless uncertainty.
My lonely heart drifts afar...
(with the bright, reverberant scents
of  softly whispering ‘poet dreams’)
in purest pursuit of infinitely simple
essential ‘truths’ and immutable love!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (05-16-2007 10:15 PM).]

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-16 09:54 PM

wow, very romantic and dreamingly beautiful.
It drifts the readers too.

enjoyed

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2007-05-17 08:00 AM

a river of emotions expressed in this one,
enjoyed!

Take a bow

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

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3 posted 2007-05-17 11:40 AM

Exploring the mystery inherent in the eternal, one might say that love takes its form of action from truth, and truth obtains its power from love. Neither one alone, however, comprises a human being. In this poem, you have wisely included both in the same breath, as each becomes the other and together they make one. Makes me think of D.H. Lawrence. Well crafted, hypnotic and beautifully done!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-05-17 11:51 AM

My lonely heart drifts afar...
(with the bright, reverberant scents
of softly whispering ‘poet dreams’)
in purest pursuit of infinitely simple
essential ‘truths’ and immutable love!

you have most certainly captured utter beauty within the honesty of life...
wonderful write

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-05-19 07:40 PM

Nice...James

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