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Afterlife?! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Afterlife?! On nights such as this... I am deeply troubled by the wind and what secret epiphanies the darkness may hold, as I hang on the cusp of chaos between time’s eternal chasm and love’s unending abyss, in a world I now face as a ‘stranger’... dissolving like the mist; I think of a thousand tiny infinitely-fleeting things, and wonder what shall still matter when even my dreams have been dead for a million years?! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
such a deep sigh in a short poem. Brilliant, Brilliant!!! again it is beautiful. All verses are beautiful. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This writing couldn't be more perfect. It is such damn fine work. Lyrical, haunting, sincere in a way that takes one's breath away! [This message has been edited by ArtSolstice (05-19-2007 10:39 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...But Bruce, surely if there is an afterlife, then you'll come back, to know.  Still writing along my lines of thinking. Much enjoyed! |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
This is a wonderful piece of writing. Very thought provoking and holds a depth that touches the reader. |
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