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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-05-18 08:38 PM


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autumn grasses—

a cold wind passes
on fallen leaves


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2007-05-18 09:41 PM


Lovely.

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Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-05-18 09:46 PM



Spring flowers-

a warm breeze lifts up
the passing showers

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2007-05-18 10:00 PM


summer sun

green leaves freckle
bald ground

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-05-18 10:05 PM


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Thank you all

Ah Helen,
any day I bring you
out of the woods
is a good day . . .

Thanks all again

John


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Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-18 11:23 PM




Winter mulches---

Soft blankets cover
on autumn's lover

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2007-05-19 12:00 PM


fall frost---

a final rose laments
winter's indifference

[Athough I employ
a writing technique
I call 'minimalistic
constructionalism'...
I likely never manage
to approach the 'purest
white light' of "minimalism"
as well as you do, John!]

Applause!!

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