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Lost within your reach |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
 When I think that all is lost You find a way to set things right When I feel my world is caving in There you are to stop its full destruction When I am at the very edge You reach for me to prevent my fall So why so I still feel Lost within your reach Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautifula agian. "So why so I still feel Lost within your reach"...speechless. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine thought-provoking 'write'! [once again...I would call this a "slice of 'everypersons'-life dejavu"...I believe we all feel this way (perhaps too often) about someone!] Applause! |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Jen. Today I realize that this listening tool will not work, and that for an indefinite period of time I will be for all practical purposes deaf. I can still go out using a little keyboard into which people may type stuff for me to read in the Braille window. so that I can still go grocery shopping, etc. The only way to socialize with others in church is if people take time to use the portable keyboard. The deafness seems to make everything more difficult and complicated, but this is only until the technology is brought back on line, and I have known far worse. It can feel very isolating and lonely. Right now I am amusing myself reading this book. I like imagining that, beyond the veils of circumstance, geography and time, someone perhaps still invisible and not audible is watching over me, and that the veils of separation are the rustling curtains that surround the mysteries of life. I like imagining that she is waiting just over the horizon I can not quite see beyond, that she is there, if only in a dream. This may sometimes help me feel "better," Even if it is nothing more than an imagination. But that's all I have. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...is this about trust...James |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I loved this and it is SO true! Sometimes when you are really close to someone you still feel as though there is something missing, something not quite right. Well done, you said it perfectly. |
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