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Open Poetry #40
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
0 posted 2007-05-18 12:30 PM

Break me
shake me
embrace me
in wild emotion
of energetic dancing light.
Hold me
mold me
entice me
with chaotic vibrance
as colors drift beyond sight.
Swirling
twirling
ever shimmering
aurora bright.


aziza
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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2007-05-20 02:25 PM


sounds like passionate love to me
great!
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-05-20 05:29 PM

fine 'write'!

[I especially like: "chaotic vibrance"]

Applause!!
Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina
3 posted 2007-05-20 05:52 PM

Great poem Alison! I really enjoyed it. It's got somewhat of a simplistic complexity to it. My contradictions aside, it is a fine piece. Cheerios  - Ed

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2007-05-20 05:56 PM

You made me swirl and twirl with the energy of this beautiful piece!

Love,
Margherita
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