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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-05-17 06:29 PM


Day Trip

Climb on board a brand new life.
Forget your troubles and your strife.
Leave your worries far behind.
Let any troubles leave your mind.
Forget the bills you have to pay.
Laugh in the face of debt today.
Face the world without a care.
Breath at last sweet freedom’s air.

Alas, tomorrow makes you pay
for all the things you freed today!


Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-17 06:39 PM


ha, ha, ha. You just can not have a minute fun.


enjoyed the first part.



paullallady
Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan
2 posted 2007-05-19 04:00 PM


The prescription for life, with its own disclaimer. I really enjoyed this.
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