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aziza
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0 posted 2007-05-17 11:08 AM


Freeze in Hell


The Devil sits upon His throne
Rugged chest covers heart of stone
Fire dances as demons roam
He is alone.  He is alone.

Hell is hot but may still freeze
Those he deems do not seek to please
Frozen flame brings them to their knees
It does not ease.  It does not ease.

The demons dance with wild heat
To the Devil they do entreat
When do we get a frozen treat?
We want to eat.  We want to eat.

The Devil's eyes are cold as stones
He knows they want to pick the bones
To hear cries of pain, tortured groans
From those atoned.  From those atoned.

The Devil stretches in his seat
Keeping hell cold is no small feat
Come on down and leave summer heat
It can't be beat.  It can't be beat.



Alison


© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
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1 posted 2007-05-17 08:57 PM


awesome! scary, but made me smile... i enjoy you writing this way ...
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2007-05-20 02:24 PM




"The Devil stretches in his seat
Keeping hell cold is no small feat"

but if you can write it
he can do it

I love it Alison

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-05-20 05:28 PM


part of soul!

truly. sometimes.

dark poem.

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