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Open Poetry #40

Honey-Kiss the apex.

Andrew Sewell
Junior Member

since 2007-04-16

Posts 24
County Durham, England

0 posted 2007-05-17 10:50 AM

Honey-kiss the apex. 17/05/07

Wheel driven through
Spray
        and shuffle back
        more tracks
Fume
        the dirty beads
        a grey cascade

        brush the drops
        they fall
        the waters rush back
        cleansing.

"Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-05-17 11:27 AM

Thank you for sharing -- I enjoyed the picture created from your words.

aziza

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-05-17 12:38 PM

this was lovely, reminded me of the old water grist mills of the Virginia's.

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