How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » Honey-Kiss the apex.
Open Poetry #40
Post A Reply Post New Topic Honey-Kiss the apex. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Andrew Sewell
Junior Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 24
County Durham, England
0 posted 2007-05-17 10:50 AM

Honey-kiss the apex. 17/05/07

Wheel driven through
Spray
        and shuffle back
        more tracks
Fume
        the dirty beads
        a grey cascade

        brush the drops
        they fall
        the waters rush back
        cleansing.

"Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein.
© Copyright 2007 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-17 11:27 AM

Thank you for sharing -- I enjoyed the picture created from your words.

aziza
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2007-05-17 12:38 PM

this was lovely, reminded me of the old water grist mills of the Virginia's.  
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » Honey-Kiss the apex.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary