different in the light my last words on the subject

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Open Poetry #40

different in the light my last words on the subject

scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15

Posts 59

0 posted 2007-05-17 10:07 AM

don't wish on them
not all of them are kind
some of them are downright nasty
and they mess with your mind

i wont be the first
a lot of people before me have said it
careful what you wish for
you just might get it

scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15

Posts 59

1 posted 2007-05-17 10:09 AM

((yes you could all read my mind and you knew i was talking about stars lol~!!))

don't wish on stars
not all of them are kind
some of them are downright nasty
and they mess with your mind

i wont be the first
a lot of people before me have said it
careful what you wish for
you just might get it

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-17 10:43 AM

what stars? movie stars? sport stars? or rock? or burn gas kind? or some heros?

shall I wish on a bruning candles?
Or springs or fountain? or a tree? or poets?

enjoyed

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
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3 posted 2007-05-17 11:16 AM

Ohhhhhhhh .. stars! .. I thought you meant "cars"

Don't wish on cars

Anyway, I like the poem and not so sure that getting your wish is a bad thing. Love you and your writing.

xoxoxo
me

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