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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-05-17 09:10 AM

I love what you do
when you do it to me.
I feel so alive
can you see
the way that only you
can make me smile?
Whether your near
or across the miles,
you fill my heart
with your song
and there's no other place
that I belong
than right here, right now
in this moment with you.
Baby, I love
this thing that you do.

This is further than I've ever fell
you know me much to well
when did I surrender to you,
tell me, where and when {Toby K}

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2007-05-17 09:21 AM

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2007-05-17 09:22 AM

Very sweet intimate write....how ya been gal?

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-05-17 09:49 AM

Thanks to you both.

If this makes him smile, then consider me
to be a happy gal.

Hi'ya there Toe, am doing good babe,
how are you!! Nice to see you.

We have a choice,
to either live in the moment
or let it pass us by....{dmsmith}

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-05-17 12:34 PM

Whether your near
or across the miles,
you fill my heart
with your song
and there's no other place
that I belong
than right here, right now
in this moment with you.

you talkin to me?

You know I'm just kidding...but loved this song, and would enjoy hearing it put to music...

very lovely write

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-05-17 09:11 PM

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2007-05-17 09:21 PM

Like Dixie....I'm smiling at
this young girl's heart being
sprung like a violist's first time
with a Stradivari...

pure devotion...

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-05-17 09:32 PM

beautiful poem of enjoy being loved. Happy!!!

enjoyed

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2007-05-18 12:12 PM

Smiles across the miles

Hope

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2007-05-18 10:00 AM

D... Wonderful Write. Been there... am there still... know the feeling well. Thank you for sharing yours. Ain't it Grand?!?

MoonShadow
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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-05-19 02:27 AM

I love this more each time I read it.

A

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2007-05-19 10:43 AM

fine, straight-forward ("real") Romanticism!

[splendid 'write'!]

sustained applause!!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

12 posted 2007-05-19 12:49 PM

I'd love to do "those things" to you..????

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

13 posted 2007-05-20 08:47 AM

Very sweet and light

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2007-05-20 10:13 AM

That magical "thing" is powerful for the appreciative heart.

So tender and captivating.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

15 posted 2007-05-20 03:05 PM

ah ha!
and I know this feeling and that's where I live gentle Donna
between where he is not
and where he is

and sometimes the where he is not roars its emptiness

hugs my friend

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

16 posted 2007-05-20 08:10 PM

Great write, wow!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

17 posted 2007-05-20 08:30 PM

Such a beautiful expression.

Much enjoyed,
Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2007-05-20 10:13 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2007-05-21 08:02 AM

My friends, thank you all so very much. I am so grateful for the friendship and kindness found on these pages of blue.

MommaK?

Dear lady Kate, I knew you would understand this one completely...oh lovie, i do agree with you, too.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2007-05-23 04:21 PM

I do believe you have said all of the
right words...now...sit back, enjoy.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

21 posted 2007-05-23 06:10 PM

hmmm...Barry, ya think??

Thanks, I really appreciate that. hugsss

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