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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-05-15 06:19 PM



One Week


One week
is not so
very far away,
one week is
only seven days
from today.
But one week
seems like
forever,
when my sweetheart
is a thousand
miles away.


JamesLee
15May
2007







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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-15 07:23 PM


you know what, I read this poem then I went to read some 10 of your old poems. 8 years of love poems! wow!!!!!
getting better and better, right? what a romantic heart!!!

enjoyed this one.... short but the love and the "I need you" tune is obvious. Ha, Ha. Happy for you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2007-05-15 07:52 PM


One week can be a lifetime when two hearts are apart
Ruth

scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
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3 posted 2007-05-15 08:55 PM


gawds being in love can make you realize how l o n g +a week is happiness always i wish you much love together
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-05-16 07:07 AM


a week can seem so long, especially when you only get paid every two weeks LOL
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-05-16 06:18 PM


Thank you Drauntz, hoot owl, scarletbegonias and passing for the nice responses...
Its six days now...almost to the gettig excited point...James

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