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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Salted Kisses I dream of sea spray Salted air kissing my cheeks Wallflower shells waiting Waiting for the waves to dance Waiting for the embrace of the tides Waiting for me As I dream of the sea And again It sprays my face with kisses. aziza |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Alison... this was a lovely read!! thank you for sharing it with us  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember this feeling time to go to the beach (when it warms up again of course) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love that feeling of being on the beach with the sea spray on my face. Nicely done! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Wallflower shells waiting" lovely aziza |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
memories flood back....nicely done.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Nice write enjoyed the read. |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
I thought this was wonderful it brought back great memories |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aw, yes! The ocean calls to me as well! I used to live on the East Coast (Canada) and I do miss those misty sea kisses! A refreshing piece of poetry, sweet aziza!   EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I recall such moments, myself. Well done, Aziza |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
nicely done. Your words brought me to the sea..and I can taste the salt on my lips as I sit here at my comp. kathy aka kitkat. Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
very good! i felt the ocean! kerri |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Indeed, this does inspire! |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
Sorry that i'm not a fan, don't particuraly like free verse but hey don't take my opinion too seriously because I'm a young poet. |
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