Open Poetry #40 |
I Continue On In My Quest |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I Continue On In My Quest I assume the missing piece Is being held back obviously Since they have only shown What they wanted me to see Meanwhile I was left to think I had patience to perservere Its been an ongoing process The picture was not yet clear Something was still missing There was this empty space In getting closer to the truth I need pieces to fit into place Maybe it will take me forever As I continue on in my quest Until this puzzle was solved My mind could no longer rest Hope ©2007 Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83854057.html |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
This poem will hit for many people. We are all out to find something. I hope you complete the puzzle. I hope that we all do |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you so much for your understanding reply , yes I continue to hope , its helps me cope Hope |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hope... lovely words here... we are all on a journey... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks so much RDB for your thoughtful reply Hugs Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hope, I'm beginning to think there is always something missing no matter how much one has in life |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hope, you demonstrate our entire individual reasons here...not only for us, but to touch the lives of others, as well, however, we do learn so much...right up until our last. Incredible life, isn't it... Incredible poet, are you. thank you for sharing. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dixie and Lee , thank you so much , you are both such thoughtful and understanding friends Hope |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you once again Vandana for reading this twice Hope |
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