navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » wrapped
Open Poetry #40
Post A Reply Post New Topic wrapped Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
scarletbegonias
Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59


0 posted 2007-05-15 09:48 AM



the tears unshed that still reach your lips
the words that get caught in your throat, that only you can hear
it's your world ~ take me there
closer to you... can you feel it
the sunshine that warms you until you can feel it inside
how i would hold you and breathe you
the part of a dream you try to get back but it eludes you each time
makes  you wonder if the answer is there
the breeze that blows something sweet toward you
inhale it deeply and let it fill you until you can almost taste it
it's how we can touch
feel us forever
healed

(written by me 6/12/2006 and true again today)

© Copyright 2007 scarlet begonias - All Rights Reserved
Jenna
Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180

1 posted 2007-05-15 10:00 AM


Wow this is so beautiful and moving.

Excellent write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-05-15 10:29 AM


Now THAT is what I'd call CLOSE!!! Simply stated ~ and simply beautiful!

A lover-ly piece of poetry!

Hi, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship! May it become like a home-away-from-home for you as it has for so many of us! You are among kindred spirits!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-05-15 06:15 PM


warm and touching.

enjoyed.

scarletbegonias
Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59

4 posted 2007-05-15 08:52 PM


awwww thank you so much
you guys are very kind
love and light,
scarlet b.

divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2007-05-16 07:55 AM


scarlet, this is loverly

it makes me think of my
most favorite poem ever
i'll post it in AkC for you
I think you'll like it

Sheli

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2007-05-16 08:04 AM


"the breeze that blows something sweet toward you
inhale it deeply and let it fill you until you can almost taste it"

Yes! a fine thought, poetically presented!
Nice to meet you, welcome to Passions!

scarletbegonias
Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59

7 posted 2007-05-16 08:52 AM


it is a beautiful poem Shelli... thank you so much for sharing it wiht me..

MidniteSun... my words looked beautiful the way you put them there... i was like oooo thats nice... oh thats me

thank you for your kindness

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2007-05-16 06:35 PM


Nice...James
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2007-05-16 07:48 PM


funny how the old ones seem to stay true

good write!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » wrapped

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary