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scarletbegonias Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59 |
the tears unshed that still reach your lips the words that get caught in your throat, that only you can hear it's your world ~ take me there closer to you... can you feel it the sunshine that warms you until you can feel it inside how i would hold you and breathe you the part of a dream you try to get back but it eludes you each time makes you wonder if the answer is there the breeze that blows something sweet toward you inhale it deeply and let it fill you until you can almost taste it it's how we can touch feel us forever healed (written by me 6/12/2006 and true again today) |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Wow this is so beautiful and moving. Excellent write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now THAT is what I'd call CLOSE!!! Simply stated ~ and simply beautiful! A lover-ly piece of poetry! Hi, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship! May it become like a home-away-from-home for you as it has for so many of us! You are among kindred spirits!  Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
warm and touching. enjoyed. |
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scarletbegonias Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59 |
awwww thank you so much you guys are very kind love and light, scarlet b. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
scarlet, this is loverly  it makes me think of my most favorite poem ever i'll post it in AkC for you I think you'll like it Sheli |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"the breeze that blows something sweet toward you inhale it deeply and let it fill you until you can almost taste it" Yes! a fine thought, poetically presented! Nice to meet you, welcome to Passions! |
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scarletbegonias Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59 |
it is a beautiful poem Shelli... thank you so much for sharing it wiht me.. MidniteSun... my words looked beautiful the way you put them there... i was like oooo thats nice... oh thats me thank you for your kindness |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how the old ones seem to stay true good write! |
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