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Open Poetry #40

An Ghaoth Aneas

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-05-14 07:46 PM

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To the tune
Of a tin whistle
Being played

Spectral figures
Dance together
Along the pebbled shore

With each step
Soft as it is
More of who they were
Drifts away

Until at last
There’s no one left
Beneath the light
Of an autumn moon

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-14 09:22 PM

shall they meet again in heaven.

sad, and sad helpless.

enjoyed

have a very good night!! Sir Pawlik

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-05-14 10:52 PM

Simply superb!

[one of the finest 'writes'
I've ever seen]

I am not often 'deeply impressed'
but, this is most assuredly one
of those times!

MUCH applause!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-05-14 11:13 PM

This sings as sweetly as any south wind song ever heard, and is an exquisite note to leave upon a soul's ears!

quote:
With each step
Soft as it is
More of who they were
Drifts away

A delightful read! MHO, it's your best yet, John.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-05-16 08:11 PM

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Thank you all

Yes, I think it's good too

Thanks again

John

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